November 8, 2011

Fibonacci Sonnet! Umm Or Something Like It :P


I know I’m not great at writing, but when Nick asked me to write a Fibonacci Sonnet, my first reaction was- “Eh? What’s that?” .. :O .. So well to those who are as clueless as me, here is what it is-



Now after reading this, I thought it’s a creative thing and I decided to take it up. I’m finally done with it, but I’m sorry it didn’t turn out well. You see, my imagination power is very limited and so is my creativity.. Pardon me, if this is rubbish! :/ .. 




Trust. 
Faith. 
Tainted words. 
Was it genuine? 
Love had tricked her again. 
Why couldn’t love ever stay in her life? 
She thought he loved her, then why was he indifferent about her feelings? 
When she came home that night to see him, she had seen him with another woman, on the bed, THEIR BED. 
How could he do this to her, she had given him her everything. 
She would make him suffer till he begged.  
All around there was blood. 
She was free. 
Twisted fate. 
Redeemed. 
Forever.
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Like I said earlier, it was my first attempt and I'm really sorry if you thought it was utter crap. I think you guys should take this up. Really makes you rack your head and CRYSTAL, if you'reading, you definitely should. I'm sure you'll do complete justice to this! :) .. Well that's it for now.... Tataaaaaa :D
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33 comments:

  1. Superrrnickkk...!!!!November 8, 2011 at 6:41 PM

    hey good job da :) i liked it :) am still working on mine :P you raised the bar real highh..!! i might just quit :D

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  2. suvaibaNovember 8, 2011 at 7:36 PM

    thats a beautiful attempt :) and the picture is so hilarious and informative..!
    yeah CRYSTAL is gonna rock at this one..!

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  3. RahulNovember 8, 2011 at 7:38 PM

    i liked it....u produced a good piece...:-)

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  4. SonshuNovember 8, 2011 at 8:03 PM

    That was actually a pretty good attempt. Though I'm not sure extremely of it myself. Will try it sometime too. Sounds interesting. :)

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  5. AnuranjaniNovember 8, 2011 at 9:12 PM

    Oooohh! I like, I like. :D

    I never knew about this! :O

    I am going to try too. :D Sometime. ;)

    I want more. Write more. :D :D

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  6. ChandanaNovember 8, 2011 at 9:41 PM

    Heyyy.. its not rubbish. I liked it! And its very interesting.. am going to try this out!

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  7. CяystalNovember 8, 2011 at 10:28 PM

    Oh my God, that's a lot of Maths for a retard like me but this sounds and looks like beautiful stuff. Totally worth a try not just by me but by so many. :O And who said you didn't do justice with this .. this is good. I think twisted fate sounds classic ! :D
    Good stuff ya .. quite a find

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  8. CяystalNovember 8, 2011 at 10:31 PM

    Listen, the second paragraph has to go from 13 to 1, not from 21 to 1. I guess. That's how the second one will be shorter naa?

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  9. Confused SoulNovember 8, 2011 at 11:13 PM

    @Nick- Lol shut up okay! I can't wait for you to be done, so I can totally read!! Thanks da :)

    @Rahul- thank you so much :)

    @Sonshu- Aww you should try man! And thanks :)

    @Anu- Hhaha neither did I know about it. Thanks to nick I gotta know :D .. And oh you should do it love.. And thank thank you :D

    @TheGirlAtFirstAvenue- Wow great! I'l pakka read it .. and thank you :)

    @Crystal- Aww thanks.. and shoot I think you're right.. I'll make the change right away.. :)

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  10. chingNovember 9, 2011 at 11:51 AM

    ive heard of the fibonacci... i just dont get the sonnet though. :D

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  11. Red HandedNovember 9, 2011 at 12:16 PM

    Oye after a long time I see something which qualifies to be a great perfect challenge!
    Lovely lines!
    U really did justice

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  12. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺November 9, 2011 at 12:36 PM

    Creative and it was good attempt

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  13. Confused SoulNovember 9, 2011 at 1:23 PM

    @Ching- Hahah I hope you get it now :D . thanks for dropping by :)

    @Red- Ooh so I'm guessing you're gonna take this up! Yayiee.. thanks love :)

    @valli- thank you :)

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  14. SajeedNovember 9, 2011 at 3:22 PM

    Awesome post yaar.. Lovely blog.. this is the first time I visited your blog... very impressive....

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  15. PhilO♥November 9, 2011 at 3:27 PM

    You said that your imagination is limited? *raises eyebrow* Seriously? You suck cause this is amazing :) It's very well written :)
    Was a nice read :)

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  16. Atrocious ScribblingsNovember 9, 2011 at 5:10 PM

    Give yourself a nice stinging pinch for underestimating yourself :D, now never ever do that again, ok?

    Articulately written *FULLSTOP*

    Cheers :)

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  17. Writing BeeNovember 9, 2011 at 5:26 PM

    A puurrffeecccttt first attempt with complete justice being done!1 I am sure I would never be able to do it, even if I had a month's time!!

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  18. Confused SoulNovember 9, 2011 at 5:40 PM

    @Sajeed- Aww man thank you soo much! That's really sweet of you.. Thanks for dropping by :D

    @PhilO- Really? I'm glad you think so! Aaah what a relief. I didn't know how this post would turn out to be.. But thanks a ton girl.. :D

    @AS- Ouucchh and that pinch hurt :P .. Ahem thank you thank you so much.. :D

    @Deepthi- Oh c'mon you can! It's not that difficult really. You just have to tell a tale, but with word limit. I'm sure you'll do it well.. And thank you :D

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  19. suvaibaNovember 10, 2011 at 4:31 PM

    i commented on this post :(( my comment was not published :((
    btw
    indeed you wrote well :) no one can guess this was your 1st post :)
    kudoz
    tc

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  20. Confused SoulNovember 10, 2011 at 5:20 PM

    Awww thanks a ton Suvaiba :D

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  21. FreelancerNovember 10, 2011 at 10:14 PM

    Great job with fib and reverse fib.
    Aim for harder challenges from now :D like limiting syllable count for example. keep it up

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  22. Confused SoulNovember 10, 2011 at 10:58 PM

    @Freelancer- Aww thank you so much! But I didn't get what u meant by limiting the syllable?

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  23. The NarcissistNovember 10, 2011 at 11:32 PM

    Wow fascinating stuff. Never knew Fibonacci series can be used to make poetry.

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  24. PratibhaNovember 11, 2011 at 12:28 AM

    This was cool ! had not heard of a fibonacci sonnet !

    there is a poetry style .. known more as "fib" that goes with counting syllables not words like in your sonnet !

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  25. Confused SoulNovember 11, 2011 at 10:58 AM

    @Abhishek- Aww thanks man! :)

    @Nimue- Ohh I had no clue about "fib". I'll look that up! Thanks fore telling me! Oh and thank you for dripping by and appreciating this post.. :D

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  26. AnonymousNovember 11, 2011 at 5:25 PM

    Now that's quite innovative :) I would like to read more of these...

    Keep up <3

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  27. kalpak n.November 17, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    this was awesome!...ur really good yaar. :)

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  28. Confused SoulNovember 17, 2011 at 1:16 PM

    @Chintan- Thank you so much :)

    @Kalpak- Good, wo toh main hu ;) :P .. heheh haha thanks :D

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  29. --November 24, 2011 at 6:56 AM

    Oh, WoW! Thank you for educating me on what a Fibonacci Sonnet is! Crystal told me to come here and I'm so glad I did! This is really an awesome form of poetry and I think you did do it justice!

    Congrats and thanks again for the directions!
    Best Wishes,
    Fiona :)

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  30. Confused SoulDecember 5, 2011 at 7:10 PM

    @Fiona- hey I'm sorry for the late reply...thank you so much for your kind words..it really means a lot to me :) .. And I read ur piece..It's nothing short of brilliant :D

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  31. ✿Sie✿December 5, 2011 at 7:23 PM

    wowa confused soul..you did great..yours is a complete reverse of my sonnet hahaha..mine was of my success on my quest for love..while yours is of breaking one's heart..I hope this does not pertain to your feelings..or else I'll be sad..I can see ms.Fiona there..passing by ;)

    thank you for visiting my site ;)

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  32. Rohit_blogger at http://floating-expressions.blogspot.in/December 8, 2011 at 2:24 AM

    just stumbled upon,lovely post
    this fibbonacci sonnet is doing the rounds in blogosphere,it seems(saw it at crystal's and lady fiona's and many others ) and u seem to be the the root :)
    I'have written mine too (~its not easy,tried my best :| )
    keep writing and sharing...
    following u through gfc
    Rohit
    floating-expressions

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  33. Confused SoulDecember 8, 2011 at 10:44 PM

    @Sie- Yep sure was a complete reverse.. well no it's pure fiction.. Thank you :)

    @Rohit- hey thank you so much!! I'll check yours out soon! And thank you for following.. :)

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